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I have words again - Alierak
December 12th, 2002
05:23 am


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I have words again
when the
automatic caution door
swallowed me whole
once before
it stole
all the people and the sun
took a vacation
from fun
but none
of the serious slush
shut me inside
the hush
just died

Current Mood: surprisedsurprised
Current Music: whatever's on VH1
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Date:December 12th, 2002 04:17 am (UTC)
Oooo! I have no idea what it's about, but it resonates with me on some level. I like it. :)
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Date:December 12th, 2002 05:22 am (UTC)
That's... freaky.
Sounds like something Smashmouth might do.
Not quite TMBG Freaky, though
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Date:December 12th, 2002 08:20 am (UTC)
The phrase "automatic caution door" brings back good memories. I love you.
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Date:December 12th, 2002 09:28 am (UTC)
Could you explain what this otherwise random babble is about then?
I assumed it was Rak quoting a song.
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Date:December 12th, 2002 10:35 am (UTC)
He wasn't quoting anything, and he'll probably be hurt that you called his poetry random babble.
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Date:December 12th, 2002 11:23 am (UTC)
Whoops :p Did I put my foot in it?
It's still fairly freaky, Rak. :)
Not freaky in a necessarily bad way, as I revel in the freaky (again: TMBG)
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Date:December 12th, 2002 04:59 pm (UTC)
Why would I be hurt? LITE didn't have any way to know what it meant :)
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Date:December 12th, 2002 05:58 pm (UTC)
I keep thinking you're as hypersensitive as I am.
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Date:December 16th, 2002 09:36 pm (UTC)


I assumed you were quoting some modern poet (or a lyricist who draws from the same well) and skimmed the comments to find out who. I like it....
(I just wrote & then cut some English-major commentary on what's good about it; this isn't the place and besides, I resigned from that club years ago.)
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